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A Dozen Red Roses Plus One by ~kavindra:iconkavindra:





I love your gentle hand on mine,
The softness of your skin.
I love the way you make me laugh,
The way you smell like spring.
I love the way you do your hair,
So I might love you more,
Although your hair could be a mess,
And I’d love you just as sure.
I love the way you look at me,
When you think I won’t notice.
If we are actors in a play,
I thank the one who wrote us.
I love the way you speak to me,
As though I understand.
I love the way you’re such a boy,
And yet, you’re such a man.
I love the way you’re just yourself,
The way your head’s on straight.
I love the way you smile at me,
The way you’re never late.
Of all the things I love you for,
There’s one that’s beat by none.
I love the way you seem to think,
That you’re the lucky one.
©2005-2009 ~kavindra
:iconkavindra:

Author's Comments

A red rose is the universal symbol of love; but a rose isn’t just a flower, it is a way to say that something about the receiver is special. Well, I don’t have the money for a dozen red roses, so these are my roses. Twelve for this lifetime and one for forever.

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:iconcrimson-whitefang:
That's awesome:) I definitely have to :+fav: this:D

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It's too bad stupidity isn't painful...:blackrose:
:iconmidgetness:
omg *loves*
the rhythm is good and consistent and its like the happy version of the poem from 10 things i hate about you :P :w00t!:
totally giving the link to my bf :P

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**please tell me thats a wand...**
:icondumbobob:
omg that is such a awsome work fav :+favlove:

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poet at heart

Im Working on a novel any comments on my first chapter would be greatly appreciated thanx [link]

Random quote
In your dream's you can be anything you want, Last night i was a pretty pink unicorn.
:iconlitti:
awwwwwww

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Millie
:iconkavindra:
omg! thankyou so much! yay! :dance:

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Love is like knowing that the world's biggest ice-cream sundae is hiding under your bed. - me
:iconkavindra:
lol. i gave it to mine and he loved it. i'm glad you like it so much. :w00t:

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Love is like knowing that the world's biggest ice-cream sundae is hiding under your bed. - me
:iconkavindra:
thanks for the fav, buddy. :D

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Love is like knowing that the world's biggest ice-cream sundae is hiding under your bed. - me
:iconkavindra:
that's what i thought...

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Love is like knowing that the world's biggest ice-cream sundae is hiding under your bed. - me
:iconlitti:
hehe, it sums up everything. awwww

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Millie
:iconclaree:
Oh I loved it! I had to make it a favourite!! it's so beautiful Louise.

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